Meaningless Life....

The description of what I feel like my life is like just now

My life is meaningless

My life is hell

Do I have any good friends?

I can't even tell...

Do they care what happens to me?

Probably not

Would they care if I died?

Yeah... Probably... Hell no!

They don't care about me

They don't give a damn about how a feel

I just wish I could see other people

The ones that are real...

Author's Note

I'm not as cheery as I usually am today... There's just something going on in my life that has brought me down...

Reviews

[dw817]

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I'm real, Rose. What is it Vina said in Star Trek ? "I'm a woman, as real and as human as you are."

Well, take out that woman part - and I'm there for ya lass. =)
Hang in there, it'll all come out in the wash, ya just gotta use the right detergent sometimes.

[The dark story]

adversities and prosperities are just two imposters in our life. we should try to treat them same. but it's jsut too hard and sometimes almost impossible to do so. in desperation, we think that like this," life has got no meaning." even i feel like this sometimes. i despise my very existence as much as those anguishing scars. yet when time moves on, those scars get healed, leaving their little "hard to be notice" marks behind.
we just use to calm ourselves by sharing our anguish with others. but there's one thing which should always be strong: a ray of hope.
touching write.

[Dhaye]

Sadness could possibly kill our outlook in life. I I have been a victim of sadness, and yeah, you're right. Life is just meaningless, like you want to end it all so that there would be no hurts and pains at all. But then always remember that the pains are not designed to live with us through eternity. They are designed to test our faith and our patience... of how we look life with our savior...and with our own persistence against odds.
Hope you and I could get away with these burdens we have right now...

[Sami Khalil]

I just wish I could see other people.
A nice write.

[Guitar Heroine]

a short but a powerful poem. nice! :)

[LouisianaBird]

I love the last two lines. For me they formed a story in my head that you'd been living with ghost of the past, and since they've betrayed you, you want to move on. :) I enjoyed.

but, I do hope that you return to your cheery self :D

[Rose]

Thank you and don't worry I have already returned to my cheery self :)

[Dr. Wood ?]

If you want cheering up pop over to my page and read Freaky Rooster..it works for most folk

[Rose]

I'm usually always a cheery person, it was just something that happened that got me sad that one day. If I ever get sad again, I will read that :)

[Dr. Wood ?]

your current depression is well reflected in these sad words..maybe writing them down you dispelled a little of your misery...It can be a great release to put things down on paper..a very moving piece

[Rose]

Thank you very much. I usually feel that I'm not that good at writing poems. But for once I actually decided to try write one, although it was a sad one.

[Dr. Wood ?]

nothing wrong with sad...Most, if not ALL the poetry on here is sad..I only write on here to cheer folk up..I am the laugh Doctor..Your poem was not a poem written by someone who cannot write poetry..You have proved that

[Rose]

Thank you. :)

[Pax]

it's hard to see them...they hide with deep facade...learn to understand is the best way..like how you understand life...great job on this short poem!

[Rose]

Thank you it's one of my first attempts at a poem, however, I would've preferred it to be a happy one, but that day I just wasn't cheery and I couldn't find any other way to express what I was feeling, so I just put this together ^^"

[Pax]

a poem ...its all about expression.. of what we felt.. and that's how it is..yet usually its sad..

[Brittany DeFranco]

awwww!! Now I want you to read my poem True Meaning, it will make you feel much better ^_^
I give this poem a 100/100 I love it