Mr ketchup's stories......feedback please..?

Please can you give me some
feedback on my Mr Ketchup
stories, as i would like to
have them published into a
book......
I post some more .
Please give me a score...
I   know they needed
drafted and polished over..
I suffer from dyslexia.
and this makes it harder
to put together ...
But so i was told
i am different
and that is so good..
Once again I need
your comments
as much as i need my
stories to trend......
So i be waiting
to see if your give
me some feedback
you see.
Thank-you this is
very important to me...

   

Reviews

[Marie]

Roslind I read all your Mr. Ketchup stories, and they are delightful enough to make a book. You lack punctuation, grammar, nd spelling skills, and you already know that. But I once rewrote one of your Mr. Ketchup stories in the correct manner. And it didn't have the charm of your original story. I don't know how these could be edited to correct the mistakes, yet keep your personality in them.