Devotion

About a tragic love

roses are red, my heart fills with dread, when your not around, I might as well be dead, 

if 

only once more I could hold your hand, listen to your buetiful voice, oh but once again, 

You 

are an angel with pretty long hair, you are the one who is always there, your buety is 

radiant 

and grand, how is it that you can stand, being around such peasents so perfect indeed, 

without your love I will bleed, For you I would commit suicide as I cant stand not being 

at 

your side, My dear I love you, is it not clear, Forever my heart is yours, ill literally rip 

out of 

my chest and place in a box, forever my love, in the box my love is locked, and you are 

the 

one with the key to my success, my failure and my misery, be well my sweet, how I love 

thee

Author's Note

NOT BASED ON TRUE EVENTS. I made this for a friend, she said she wanted something dark. Its not about a real person.

Reviews

[Bluefire]

"my chest and place in a box, forever my love, in the box my love is locked, and you are
the
one with the key to my success, my failure and my misery, be well my sweet, how I love
thee"
Made me think of a song by Twenty One Pilots "A Car, A Torch, A Death..." Or something like that.
By the way, buety is spelled with an A in it, beauty, beautiful.
What I'm saying is, it can go for some editing.
But anyway, well done, creative!

[Jamestown]

Well penned!
Very strong emotions running in this piece,
love will do crazy things to a person!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!