A Home for a music note

A misplaced note in the song

Something is off, something is wrong

Where is my home?

I thought it was with you.

I heard your note clear and strong

Somehow familiar and so in tune with my own

music with you bringing me joy

so tired of life's noise

until outside cacophony

disrupts our symphony

corrupting our link

Rhythm no longer in sync

alone resonating loudly

but no one hears sadly

Where is my home?

I thought it was with you

Author's Note

needs work still Be honest

Reviews

[barleygirl]

This is a clever & well-crafted tapestry with musical themes & the idea of sharing frequencies with another. I love this analogy as a way to suggest that gnawing gut feeling we get when a situation is not right, but it's also not all wrong. Just teetering on the edge of dissatisfaction, trying to decide whether or not to insist on a more complete symphony for one's love life!?!? This is a nicely original message. Hope you & your loved ones have a great Christmas season (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie