Wow! Absolutely beautiful, I love it! Beautiful imagery and was compelled to read on. From the beginning, I was in awe of the description; something every woman wishes her husband/lover to see. How spot on the flow, vivid in detail. Thank you. Wonderful job.
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thank you so much, Dale, glad you liked it. The picture is my wife's favoroute too. :)
Rudi
Am so glad your wife does; will get my husband to read later; he's trying to snooze or one eye open .. read moreAm so glad your wife does; will get my husband to read later; he's trying to snooze or one eye open watching old western; either way he deserves it. Tks. D.
9 Years Ago
Like westerns too, The good, the bad and the ugley with from Sergio Leone and music from Ennio Morri.. read moreLike westerns too, The good, the bad and the ugley with from Sergio Leone and music from Ennio Morricone, real good old western, they don't make them this way anymore, hell they don't make them anymore :)
I like the depth of this and I always enjoy a poem inpired by a painting. I love seeing how each brush stroke translates into words.
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9 Years Ago
Thank you Will, a painting by itself can be a poem to, you just have to find the words to translate .. read moreThank you Will, a painting by itself can be a poem to, you just have to find the words to translate in on paper. Glad you liked it. :) Rudi
I really like that painting. What's the story, Rudi?
I enjoy "two eastern tinted shelves" as well.
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9 Years Ago
Well, the woman on the painting is the wife of the painter. She likes cats and...voilà...there was .. read moreWell, the woman on the painting is the wife of the painter. She likes cats and...voilà...there was a painting. :)
To be honest your imagination is what I love! You pick up different concepts and always write something beautiful on it. I am in love with your poetry.
Very intriguing. Thank you :)
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9 Years Ago
Thanks, that is a great compliment, Isha, I'm glad you love my poetry. Have a good day. :) Rudi
Lovey poem . Does it rely too much on the visual you have supplied?
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9 Years Ago
Yes, it's the description of the thoughts and feelings that I had, still have, when looking at that .. read moreYes, it's the description of the thoughts and feelings that I had, still have, when looking at that painting. I think it also trying to get into the painters head. I know for example that that is the woman on the painting is his wife and that he had difficult times in which she has helped him. :)
Rudi
Bravo, I love the imagery so much Sir..
I could picture the haze of hair in a breeze and that twist in the end is just too good..
So glad to have come across your writing...
Beautiful artwork and description.
"it’s those eyes
two eastern tinted shelves
with a haze of hairs
a blush on the cheeks
that mingles with the sky"
The above description I liked a lot. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
and the wind
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thank you, John. Glad you liked it and took time to review my poem. :)
Rudi
9 Years Ago
I wanted more story. You gave enough to tempt my interest.
her eyes are mesmerizing like a cat, why are they like two eastern tinted shelves? she is everywhere like the sky and the wind....ok, so the shelves are in the East and they have a wood finish on them, most of our wood is tinted or we tint it, ok that's what I'm getting from this, of course it's very romantic like all your stuff, very handsome of course too! You should be loved more! though you are I believe or hope for your sake,
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9 Years Ago
Thank you Laura for your favourable comment. I think her eyes look a bit Japanese and in a form of a.. read moreThank you Laura for your favourable comment. I think her eyes look a bit Japanese and in a form of a shelve, that's why I wrote eastern tinted shelves, it's just my view on this mysterious lady. Thank you for the wish, I'm cared for, so no worries. :)
I'm from Belgium. English is not my native language, but I like to read English poems and books. I have written a lot of Dutch poems during the last forty years. With some of them I've got prizes in B.. more..