Absence

You are no longer here,
I can’t sense you in winter wind’s breath,
I can’t hear you sing sweet songs of summer,
nor smell the light freshness of spring rains.
I can’t feel you whisper my name,
as soft as the touch of the first snowflake

when it lands on my closed eyelid.

Reviews

[Roger Turgeon]

If I had a criticism it would be to add the word "you in" after the word "smell" to make it more consistent.

Other than that I like the backdrop of the seasons because it portrays a long period of absence...yet you still remember.

[Ruzica]

Thank you kindly for your suggestion and review, much appreciated! :)