Day in the life.

Sitting alone full of discontent,

lacking meaning.

Scribbling down all thoughts that pass through his mind.

Thinking about oh so much yet oh so little.

Criticizing everything he thought, 

full of unhappiness.

Yet the happiest in a long time.

Reviews

[DaGirlNxtDoor]

awesom poem xD

[Lydia]

Ironically beautiful. Great write, I really enjoyed it.

[Serend1p1ty]

I like this.
Maybe its the contradicting ending, I don't know, but I like this.
Seriously.

Yours truly,
cloud6

[Gheeneil]

Life is full of irony. There is so much surprises even in little things. And, that makes life so interesting.

[Cคɾเ&#..]

This peom tells so little yet so much. Simple words can create a powerful meaning. Iv'e felt the feeling too, ur happy but u feel unhappy at the same time. Great Job!

[unspokenguilt]

Great write!
I don't doubt that many can relate
best wishes,
Elyssa

[MissDragon]

simple and yet complex. interesting.

[Last Lying Look]

Ah.
This one is also short & I also like this one a lot.
Sometimes I feel like I've spent my entire life like that;
Spaced out, writing down all of the passing thoughts, criticizing them & than being so unhappy that I'm almost happy about it.
Great write.
-Elissa

[Catastrophe]

This was very deep and full of raw emotion...beautiful!!
I really loved it.

[Hedra Helix]

eloquent. breathE