The final showdown

This piece is personal to me. Once upon a time, I had to deal with a personal and ugly issue within my workplace. Hope you enjoy it though! :-)

The sun beats down on my heavy shoulders

Burning my structure, and integrity

I feel there is no escape from the cave of emptiness; it's blocked by heavy boulders

 

Although, there is hope for me I know, in the most strongest of its purity

I bow down to the all mighty ones in control, there is no remorse, no mercy

Sometimes, there's a light at the end of the tunnel, a sense of good expectation

Though, I cannot bear to think that its death that's calling for an anniversary

I hold my breath; they come forth with their wicked news. I feel overcome with deprivation

 

I angrily throw the towel in, waiting for one of them to challenge me

A battle had now started. Good versus bad, light against dark

The horn was sounded, the war commenced. The crowd eager to watch with glee

 

The awaiting soldiers listened to hear their fates, only one will be kicked off the park 

I heard the screaming crowds chant with such ferocity,

The evil one had gone against all rules of the policy

 

Reviews

[L]

interesting piece. Cool

[London]

very nice! i liked this

[Daytonight]

Very intense battle raging. Well written. You might improve the flow a little bit by removing some of the punctuation and capitals though. But other than that it was a very good write. Keep on penning.