The slithering evil

The hissing, crawling slithering evil stares at me with his glinting glares

His forked tongue darts wildly as he slides ever closer to my body, looking for a taste

Hiss... hiss....hiss he speaks as he wraps his scaly, muscles round my bedpost, it scratches and tears

I try to escape, but I’m frozen. He begins his accent up my thigh and wraps himself around my waist

 

I wriggle and twist, but I cannot resist his evil plan to feed. He wraps himself tighter and hisses with delight

This time, there’s no escape from the devil, he has me where he wants me, and tonight is his night

His white, razor sharp fangs rise up from his large jaws. Lusting for my flesh, he bites his vice like grip held in place

I cry with pain as the blood trickles down from my arm onto his arrow head face

I am trapped, with no escape i keep running from death, but I know he’s going to win the chase

 

Author's Note

This was a bad dream i had. A giant, grey snake slowly chasing me round my room. the door was locked i couldn't get out, the snake kept biting and fiercely hissing at me as it wraped itself around my body. Who knows why i had this nightmare, but at least i got some kind of writing done. :-)

Reviews

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

wow!

great depiction of a snake........
it seems realistic

[NightShade]

A fantastic recollection of a horrific dream. I like it.

[light and ashes]

I think I once had a similiar nightmare. This is scary just like the nightmare but, I agree at least you turned it into writing :]

[...]

Goodness this is dark and wonderful, love the vivid imagery.

[KAREN]

Great imagery and creepy. Well done!

[Dream Weaver]

Nightmares make for creative writing, especially the ones
that are so vivid so surreal. You've done a great job bringing
these nightmares to life...Nicely done...

[Samantha Heaton]

Very powerful poem!! good job!

[Nicky Wilson]

WOW !!! very descriptive and is it okay that i fell a little scared ? I really hate snakes but this poem is flawless and I can't help but love it ! gr8 job :)