Whispers

Lying on the deck

Feet, swishing in the water

Thinking about past,

Summers while listening to

The whispers of the soft wind

Reviews

[NeverSurrender]

Nice poem, it's short yet finished. I see the image you created in my mind and I can almost feel the water and the wind, nicely written. Well done!

love,

N.S.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. Nothing better the a soft breeze and the ocean at your feet. I like the feel and the gentle emotion in the poem. A peaceful flow of words. Thank you.
Coyote