this wont be

this wont be pretty

Its no Abelard's letter to Heloise

If you are finding words for  your wedding vows,

go somewhere else

If its your daughter christening or graduation

and you dont know what to say,this is no place to be

If you read poetry for some weird sort of mental solace,

dont read me

If you are trying to stuff your belly with spirituality

I dont do drugs yet

If  you think words enliven and rejuvenate

and you aren't kidding

go get a life man

if its some strange self recognition therapy

ughh you make me sick

and your physchiatrist is robbing you

like I  said this isn't pretty or divine or celestial

This is just a cultured form of mind f---k

I dont do poetry  

Reviews

[Tim]

I felt like you were yelling at me. But I liked it.

[Jibey]

Ah, you beat us up so badly sometimes...

[{A}shley {B}lack @-;-]

Another fine piece of writing i'm honoured to have read your mind f**k in all honesty such powerful words and a strong message

keep them coming

100/100

[Emily B]

your poetic mind is so sharp . . . there is nothing you can't do

[Jasmine]

fair enough...

[Khaaki]

it's difficult to be moderate in this age... every one has extreme views... you are extremely honest sahar... you always put it straight... as serah said... brilliant...

[.]

. a brilliant piece of poetry ... to me, it's about the freedom of expression ... we should be free to express ourselves ... if i hadn't expressed myself, i'd be nowhere ...

[abhas]

a cultured form of mind f**k... well... i havent ever heard of that kind of description made about poetry and never will... because what you have written really is poetry... but im sure probably people will stop reading you mental solace or worse they'll find solace in this kind of honest, straight approach... whatever be the case the words you put is still good... :)

[emmajoy]

Honesty begets honesty, straight speaking keeps us straight!

Love it .. and, sorry to disagree but you do do: a rose is a rose is a rose and all that!

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

oh wow .. you told us? lol someone!
as for 'I don't do poetry' i beg to differ..
Seems you are saying some like to over analyse things written.
This carries a punch!

Chloe