Hatred

what u think its about idiot?

Hatred 

 

it was the water behind the dam

it steadily grew greater and more terbulent

ready to move, to flow from my mind 

and unleash itself on the town below.

 

 

the warnings were there

the signals of containment losing its grip

no one paid attention

they didnt really care

 

the option to make ammends was there

to stop this hateful river from bursting past its limits

now its too late

the dam has finally broken  

 

now all thats left is for this raging river to flow 

to take its course whatever it may be 

to fall upon the fools below 

who now have tempted this rivers immortal rage  

 

The hatred of my mind  

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Shane Brooks]

not bad not bad at all...a couple of lines are a little teenage angsty but over all good grasp on words you might wanna find an outlet for that angry water though...I suggest singing in a metal band screaming your hate is very theraputic

[Chloe Madison Taylor.]

wow.

count to ten.
go to anger management.
beatbox.
breakdance.

i dont know. One time i ripped a door off its hinges and threw it at my brother because i was so angry.
I'm considering going into the door ripping business.

consider it.