Black Cats and Firestone Den (Working Title)

A Book by SDGeiger

A young man sails through the apocalypse, seeking the magical stones of the gods because he believes the stones can help him save the world. This is an epic, action-packed fantasy adventure.

Chapters

Chapter 1 - Queen De Shaus

© 2016 SDGeiger

Author's Note

Open to all critique.
Specifically looking for:
- Mistakes on "archaic" modern english dialogue
- Inaccurate sailing terms
- Repetitive and boring parts (I'm being ruthless cutting stuff out so don't be afraid to tell me to put something on the chopping block).
- Anything that needs more explaining (I've cut out the boring mythology and there's a lot going on so I hope the plot makes sense).
Please note sailor dialogue is different than other dialogue and makes use of singular you (ya) and plural you (ye).

This is a giant book. It's actually 4 books, but I've decided to just put it all together.