Thinking of You

I close my eyes and open my thoughts
Seeing becomes nullified while darkness expands
I find myself doing nothing according to plan
Searching for answers that won't appear

First i wonder why this is happening
If it is trying to show me soemthing that I don't see
I flip through the memories and find that there are none
I can't move around this blockade
Finally I welcome the thoughts to sort through them

I sit here thinking of many things
Finding one that is pushing forward
I think of what it is
The answer is clear
Of all the thoughts entering my mind
I embrace the biggest

I can't stop thinking of you

Reviews

[*Rain*]

"I can't stop thinking of you"
Isn't it harder to get through than a song playing over and over in your mind? Trying NOT to think about someone you HAVE to think about is a killer. A delightful killer....

[gravitylava]

Good write, I like this.

Of all the thoughts entering my mind
I embrace the biggest
I can't stop thinking of you

I like that part the best =D
-michelle

[J.K. (Not Rowling)]

I enjoyed how you were sorting through thoughts, cataloging them in an ordered fashion before embracing that one thought. The flow and length of this poem were great. Nice job. Welcome to the Cafe.

[turtlegirlluver]

You show what you are thinking of very clearly and describe it very well. I can relate to this big-time, very good job!

"I sit here thinking of many things
Finding one that is pushing forward
I think of what it is
The answer is clear
Of all the thoughts entering my mind
I embrace the biggest

I can't stop thinking of you"

[Emily B]

I think you've described the phenomenon in a striking way. It is a lovely, lonely poem.