Forever and Ever and Never at all

Forever and Ever and Never at all

A Poem by Sunny

Forever and ever is a long time wait
But if you're patient enough you pass the waiting
But only wait
And to wait some more

But never at all is a long time for nothing
Never is not nothing
Its not just nothing
But the absence of something

© 2015 Sunny


Author's Note

Sunny
Yes I know it really makes no sense. Buuut its what I wanted

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"Never is not nothing
Its not just nothing
But the absence of something"
Oh, you play with words very well. I found myself speechless because of the ending. I agree with Chelsey. This was deep. There was something more that you can squeeze in it. Nice work.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is actually pretty deep, either that or I'm thinking too hard about it. Good job. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago



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