Wonderful Time!

Wonderful Time!

A Poem by Sunny
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Up-beat short song I came up with a second ago. :D

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It's a wonderful time of the year!
A Wonderful TIME!!
No I won't cryin'
no, no, no,
I only plan on smilin'!!
Cause It's a wonderful time!

© 2014 Sunny


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This is so cute and happy!!! :) :) Great job! :) :) :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sunny

9 Years Ago

Thank you!
With little words its so cute many do love to smile great job :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very optimistic write. I agree with Peace Keeper's corrections.

Posted 9 Years Ago


You're positive outlook on life shines through again.
Nice job. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sunny

9 Years Ago

Thank you Ana!
I like it, I can see it as upbeat, the only thing I would consider changing is "No I don't cryin'" to No I won't be cryin and "I only plan smilin'" to I only plan on smilin' this way it flows better. Other than that it was good.

Good Job

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sunny

9 Years Ago

Oh gosh what would I do without you?! Yes your suggestions were the original thought.
~*~Peace Keeper~*~

9 Years Ago

haha You're welcome ^^

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Added on September 28, 2014
Last Updated on October 3, 2014
Tags: Fall, Winter, Song

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