Hurricane

 

 

thoughts caught in a hurricane
as our mistakes go unblamed
i was willing to feel the pain
it took to mend our lives
together

 

nothing even went wrong
our love just got lost in the storm
I wish you would come home
to feel the warmth
of your love with me
together

 

you come to me
when nobody else is around
and remenis
looking into your eyes
i know you miss
feelings like this

 

If only we could have weathered the storm
we wouldn't have to wonder
what it would be like
still being with eachother

Reviews

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is beautiful as is all your work.Did you mean to spell "remenis" this way.

[shawnt5604]

how do you spell it? lol

[Vidya Bacchus]

lol I just had to check to see if I was spelling it right.It is "reminisce"

[shawnt5604]

ok great thanks!

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome.I am sorry I just corrected you in your other poem sheesh :)