बेसब्रियां

A short note by SUNDAY..... to all those who are still dreaming of the MOnday..

kashmakash hai samundar ki,

registaan ke sannante hai,

 

ye gum hai jo mere hisse mai,

 

zindagi ne sabko ye baante hai.

jis dhoop ki talash mai hum nange paon bhagte hai,

vo hai bhi ki nahi ye hum nahi jante hai,

jitna hai bas utna hi hai,

 

iss baat se bekhabar hum chalte jate h.

isi liye to ye gehre sannate hai....

jo zindagi ne sabhi ko baante hai.....

Reviews

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Khushi bhi diya hai zindegi ne chahe gum bhi diya ho
Kaun hai aisa batao, jisne gum ka kabhi ghoot na piya ho.....
You're writing is wonderful...nice read😊

[APOORVA]

gehre sannate, good one.
keep up the good work writer.

[AYUSH]

shukriya :)

[Nidhi]

it jst like beautiful gift of sunday by a poet..😊

[AYUSH]

thanku :)

[Ayush Mishra]

jitna hai bas utna hi hai,
iss baat se bekhaber hum chalte jate h...
(should be like this...to interconnect words is very important)

meanwhile its a good start...

[AYUSH]

thanks for the appreciation and error correction.
:)

[Ayush Mishra]

hahaha...all urs bro :p