Perfection to me

It is a poem that describes my thoughts regarding my love or crush .

Happiness to me rises from you,
You're the example of perfection.
I'm falling for you so easily
I don't even remember,
From which day or which month

Best part of my day is
Our little sweet conversation
You're the one whom
I've desired for so long
In my dream and in my imagination

People say nothing is perfect in the world but I think you 've proved them wrong.
I always want to sing you
coz you're my favourite song
And also bcoz i think
You're the best example of perfection.
The end.

Reviews

[Nathan the Sane]

A very sweet poem. It really shows the love felt towards others and how much they mean to you ("...you've proved* them wrong is great!").
A question: is because purposefully abbreviated to 'bcoz'? It just seems a little out of place with the rest of the text.
(*is 'proved' right here grammaticly? I'm horibble at spelling and grammar so I'm not sure, but it seems that 'proven' would be better. Worth a check!)
Keep up the great work :)

[Love yourself]

Well thanks sir!!
Yes beacause is abbreviated to bcoz
And I'll surely try my best for correcting my grammers but you know if we are writing poems with full heart and our feelings then we don't even.notice our grammar bcoz we just wanna express what we feel .
But I'll surely check my grammar after I finish writing my poems. :-)

[Nathan the Sane]

Sure thing! I know how frequent and annoying typos and rushed grammar is. Obviously the more important part is the text, which you have done a beautiful job of creating. And when the writing flows out, you don't hit the brakes for something as silly as grammar:)