You

You lied to me
You said, "Forever and Always"
You lied to me
You walked away in spite of me
You said "It's time to turn the page."
You've left me scarred in horrid ways
You lied to me

Author's Note

A mix of a basic Pleiades and a rondelet. Was originally solely intended to be the latter. Just having a bit of fun, I suppose.

Reviews

[Leslie Philibert]

Fine job, with a lot of tempo,from the rap corner...

[Tasha]

Wow, it was short but it expressed so much emotion. It was also very descriptive. Great yet sad write.

[Jeremia]

Wow, so short but so descriptive. So short, but yet so filled with emotion. I like this.