You

You

A Poem by Sacha Davison

You lied to me
You said, "Forever and Always"
You lied to me
You walked away in spite of me
You said "It's time to turn the page."
You've left me scarred in horrid ways
You lied to me

© 2012 Sacha Davison


Author's Note

Sacha Davison
A mix of a basic Pleiades and a rondelet. Was originally solely intended to be the latter. Just having a bit of fun, I suppose.

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Fine job, with a lot of tempo,from the rap corner...

Posted 7 Years Ago


Wow, it was short but it expressed so much emotion. It was also very descriptive. Great yet sad write.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Wow, so short but so descriptive. So short, but yet so filled with emotion. I like this.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Sacha Davison
Sacha Davison

NEW BRUNSWICK, Canada



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A collection of content, largely unedited, that I have created over the years. Most pieces currently posted are from my teenage years, but I will be posting more examples of my work, in the near futur.. more..

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