Life

Life is work, life is empty 

 Life is create, life is destiny 

 Life is dust, life is proud 

 Life is neither but life is good 

 Life is power and other hand 

Life is pity or mercy 

That all can't change by source 

 It is the true fact of life's world 

 And it will be do must.

Reviews

[Michael G. Smith]

You are so right and when your right, you are right. Life is good! And we do create ourselves through each choice we make.

[Susan Beth Horvath]

Good flow of images and words. nice piece

[Sophy Freebirds]

Yes my friend you have rightly said it.. it really boosted me up. I love positive reads and this is surely one of that..nice write ;) keep writing

~Sophy

[raj24]

well said my friend...life is about many things..and most importantly about creating ourselves..thanks for it :)

Raj

[John Anderson]

A compelling, engaging piece of work

[Eve Ola]

enjoy each turn of life at its best .. a great write

[Matching Socks]

Each day brings a new experience, a new feeling.

[Saddam]

Really, you know. Thanks for reading and reviewing...

[Anne Timmins]

a thought-provoking and interesting poem...well done!

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear poet...

[Rene Salinas]

As I read through the lines I am met with clear boundaries of what is and what is not. Personally not something I relate to. Anyone with that level of certainty would have the power to just do and change at will as the Architect that sits and carefully crafts a blueprint which later will come to shape. So are we creating anything or only a constant mere recreation? Oh, as the mighty Shiva hisses and revels in human rightousness that blinds and malaise takes over.

Intriguing read.

Thankyou

[Saddam]

Thank you so much for this honest review... I am glad.

[Kamari's]

Life is complex yet simple but I enjoyed thiswell doñe