SOMETHING IN YOU

Something in your smile speaks to me

Something in your voice sings to me

Something in your eyes tells me

That you are the dearest person to me.

 

Something in your speech fascinated me

Something in your face enlightens me

Something in your laugh makes me rejoice

And then I have no choice.

 

Except to know you're the one I always love to see

Something about you makes me want to care

Something in you is so rich and rare

For you are the one person that I can trust

And there is something in your charm

That will never rust.

 

Reviews

[Barbz]

After reading this, I went directly to my piano and tinkled with the keys. It created a lovely melody. Very nice work.......Barbz

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear. Appreciated your words.... Thanks.

[T. Adams]

I enjoyed this. My only suggestion would be to change "Except to know you be the one.." to "Except to know you'll be the one…"

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend. I am glad at your suggestion. Thanks a lot dear friend.

[MomzillaNC]

Very sweet sentiments.

NOTES:
"Except to know [you're] the one I always love to see"

[Saddam]

I made your suggestion friend. Thanks for being so kind.

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome. Glad my comments were helpful.

[Ishita Dixit]

Very beautiful!
Nicely done!

[Saddam]

Thanks a lot dear friend

[Mila]

A very timeless work that I read with incredible ease. Well done!

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend, it is appreciated much.

[Roshan Nair]

Nice and timeless write saddam, great work.. its crisp and yet says all it wants with ease. cheers

[Saddam]

Thanks a lot dear friend. Much appreciated.

[Deepika]

Something in this piece makes it a treat to read,
For the feelings are gleeful and the words are lucid:)

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend. Well rhymed.

[Arshia]

Quite a deep poem with a nice rhyming scheme. Well written :)

[Saddam]

Thank you dear. It is much appreciated review.

[Busiku Halwiindi]

Sorry meant touching and very simple

[Busiku Halwiindi]

Sorry meant touching and very simple

[Saddam]

thank you very much....little bit is not issue.