WAVE

How it is strange wave?

Sometimes fast, somehow slow

The zealous is not waive

But it comes with all flow.

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Simple lovely and Elegant piece.

we have a zealous God Lord
for our love zealous is also protecting
but I think you meant it in a different way
but you made me think of Jesus Lord and
Savior how Zealous he is of us.



Beautiful stanzas lines here
zealous is a very beautiful word
I understand it very well.


The zealous is not waive
But it comes with all flow.


Thank you for sharing.


God bless. Benita

[Saddam]

Thanks a lot dear...

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're welcome.

[Rehan Roy]

You are right, dear poet..zealous is not a waive....this's a written wisdom.

[Saddam]

thank you very much dear friend....

[costa siwale]

This is a very neat, short piece

[Saddam]

thank you dear friend.

[costa siwale]

This is a very neat, short piece

[Saddam]

Thank you dear friend..

[DIVYA]

A cleverly written piece. Very thought-provoking too.

[Saddam]

thank you very very much dear...you are such a darling....thanks.

[DIVYA]

You are welcome. Have a lovely day.

[Saddam]

thank you.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Indeed, a clever and decisive piece, well done.

[Saddam]

thank you dear friend...

[Sami Khalil]

Cleverly written...:).......................

[Saddam]

thank you sir....

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome, sir...:)....................

[Vidya Bacchus]

Interesting my friend and so well penned :)

[Saddam]

Thank you dear angel....love you.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome Ssadd :)

[Penny]

Clever and very deep. Looks like you have poured all your poetic maturity and talent in the ocean to make this wave rise.. rise above excellence. Thanks for sharing.

[Saddam]

Thank you dear friend for this risen comment...I am owe to your words.

[Penny]

Your most welcome.

[Penny]

Your most welcome.

[MsJewel]

Very clever!

:) julie

[Saddam]

hehehe...thank you dear....

[Shaquana Adams]

Clever and witty. Nice work :)

[Saddam]

thank you very much dear poet.