SOULFUL MOMENT

SOULFULL MOMENT

-SADDAM HUSEN

 

She was in front of me

I was before her

Tongue was wordless

Eyes were watery and-

Tears were running down.

 

Everything were passed

Every moment is in pour heart

Smiling, scratching, tinkling

Peers through our eyes.

 

I swept her flowing tears

She kissed me on forehead

And then…..

And then, we parted our way.

 

 Though years had rolled out

Seasons come, change their reason

But still that soulful moment teasing heart.

Reviews

[costa siwale]

A touching piece, well penned SSADD

[Penny]

This poem is complete in itself. It has romance, effect, pain, everything. Perhaps your best work. Very tell done.

[Saddam]

I wrote it almost two years ago in hindi but one day aisehi I translate it. Glad you all like my poetry.

[lpkerr1]

Beautiful! This is a sweet and lovely poem

[Saddam]

Thank you very much dear for your beautiful review.

[lpkerr1]

You're welcome

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lovely Ssaad .You have penned this well :)

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear.........

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[ConfuzzledKidd]

Wow that was really heartfelt. Was very touched by it

[Saddam]

Thanks sir... I'm glad to hear you sir.

[Tina Louise UK]

Beautifully touching Ssad, enjoyed :) x

[Saddam]

Thank you for touching review...

[Sami Khalil]

Always wonderful to remember those soulful moments...Bravo sir...:).........

[Saddam]

Thank you for wonderful review.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).................

[DIVYA]

Very well expressed...the eternally youthful, teasing, jesting heart... One of your best writes.

[Saddam]

You are best through your swords and heart dear friend...thanks for reading and giving your compliments...