Balm for Your Soul

Balm for Your Soul

A Chapter by Saddam

Balm for Your Soul 

ssadd collaborate with penny

 

Every feeling is real 
It is new but effectively true 
Now track my every wreck 
This vital virtue could not control by any rescue.

Feel my ultimate jealousy
for your standing by others end 
whether he is your friend 
I just want a walk, hand in hand with you.


You are irrestrictive elusive
you are not here yet luring
Fast stimulation for your curing 
Violent-nascent, hollow-shadow, hard to spend moments few.



© 2014 Saddam


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Great collab Ssadd. You must keep doing more. Just loved this read!

Posted 10 Years Ago


gud one buddy ,..i like it .........bt can u plz tell me what is "irrestrictive" ? .....what i think ,it should b unrestrictive......and i liked the opening lines

"Every feeling is real
It is new but effectively true"
touched my heart .

Posted 10 Years Ago



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