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A POEM WITH DEAR FRIEND RACHELLE......ANOTHER COLLAB

Let me meet you
In Life's sorrows and joys
all my nights and days

With you - in every cheer and strife

to live Life with you
as my rising sun and dazzling moon

You and I alone filling the void
sharing one another's vision

 

Head on your shoulder
  Palm in your hand
 I share my dreams

no feasible fear for being departure                 
upper from all earthly uncouth bonds 
let snatched all foes and ends wreck.

Reviews

[Simran Kewlani]

This poem is raw. If it came from a new writer, I would have called it amazing. When it comes from an amazing writer like you, I'd say, It is simple and sweet with emotions filled in. (:

[Kamari's]

Emotions are raw and more sensitive with a tenderness to them I love it

[Penny]

A simple and sweet piece. You may call it Khwahish-Our wishes. Nice work there

[Utkarsh Singh]

gud one bhaii .......ese he likhta rhe and india ka naam roshan karta rhe .......:D

[star73]

you know i love all your poems very good my friend!

[lissalovesyou]

Oh, how lovely. Added to favs.
Love keeps us going through life. I love the words you chose. They show perfectly the deep love of the two people described.
lissalovesyou:)

[Arabella Song]

This is one of my favorites of yours :) A few grammatical issues in your last stanza, but overall I noticed a marked improvement and I really really love this description of being with a loved one

[FlatLineBeauty]

This was beautiful. Good write. Xo winter

[Sami Khalil]

Love cheers you in your strife and steers you in your life. Excellent...:)............

[Ruth]

Lovely...hopeful and insightful and tenderly expressed x