A CONFESSION

A Poem by Saddam

THIS IS A CONFESSION OF A LOVE BETWEEN TWO GIRLS

OF COURSE I AM IN LOVE

THOUGH CONFUSION IS THERE FOR NOW

IT IS YOU OR YOUR FRIEND

I BADLY THINK ABOUT IT TILL THE DAY END

I LOVE YOU BUT CAN'T SHUNS HER TOO

SHE IS MY BREATH THOUGH HEART BEAT IS YOU

ABOUT EVERY DAY I FEEL A NAIL POIGNANT

I DON'T KNOW WHETHER IT IS RIGHT OR PORTENT

I LIKE YOUR SMILE, YOUR FRIEND'S EYES

THAT YOUR CATCHY BEAUTY MY HEART IS FLIES

I KNOW, IT IS OVER PERSUADE BUT LUCID

DON'T WANT BREAK YOUR FAITH WHICH YOU BUILD

I LEFT MY DECISION FOR YOU, BOTH

IT IS MY VOICE AND IT IS THE TRUTH.

© 2014 Saddam

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Sonam

short and sweet sonnet....you have written it in a way that it expressed everything you wanted to say...

however, your situation seems funny to me. sorry if it hurts you but dear its definitely not love. you are attracted to both of them....nice confession although ;)

Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

that's why he is confessing...... If you will read my other poetry you can understand. I believe onl.. read more

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NotaBene

I think it would be easier to count the people who have not been in this situation. Love can be such a bully sometimes, always tugging on heart strings. I really enjoyed this piece. My favorite line "She is my breath, though heart beat is you" really puts the poem into perspective about just how difficult a decision this is for him. Good write!

Posted 9 Years Ago

Enigmatic Amor

Ah, a sad but universal problem. You left them to choose? The easy way out!

Nicely written.

Posted 9 Years Ago

Frieda P

You sound torn Ssadd....we don't like to be left hanging you know, although this tends to happen quite often, you pen'd it aptly.

Posted 9 Years Ago

MsJewel

Love can be confusing..the heart wants what the heart wants..and sometimes we must let someone go to be fair to them.. which is never easy...if that makes any sense.

The wording in your poem is wonderful. Great work my friend

:) Julie

Posted 9 Years Ago

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9 Years Ago

Thanks you very much dear poet... Agree with you......

Benita-Staebell M - Kin..

Seems you love them Both Not possible but
in the end here I see it is her not her friend.

Beautiful Imagination here love
how you saw the Beauty in both
of them is all I can say not sure
what else to say.

if I am confused I know it isn't love
God isn't a god of Confusion when confusion
comes to me it is the devil I walk the other
way and I don't like being confused so God
deals with it for me then the confusion goes away.

Hope you find out what you want but you can only
have one :)

there is love then there's In infatuation and lust
and Erotic none of that is love I have heard of crushes also
and confusion isn't good to have and the heart can miss lead
us it isn't always right it is very deceiving I lean on god and
allow him to choose now if we are Rejected and it doesn't work
out then it is god saying no that is the wrong Path only he knows
what is right for us.

Thank you for sharing this nice piece.

Blessings. kindred poet

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Ranger Kessel

I get it. Nice job. I like how it is straight and to the point. Nothing wishy washy

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10 Years Ago

I'm sorry but I'm not following.

audrie

ABOUT EVERY DAY I FEEL A NAIL POIGNANT
I DON'T KNOW WHETHER IT IS RIGHT OR PORTENT

I especially enjoyed these lines - it's a disturbing to have to chose between lovers - there have been many times in my life when I wanted to have it all but, naturally my lovers didn't jive with that - I understand completely why they did not want to share me - I think it's because I haven't found the one yet -good piece of work