YOU ARE WITH ME....

YOU ARE WITH ME....

BY SADDAM HUSEN

These distances are not making me worry

But its bringing you more close

A drift is slowly blowing

You are out there but in me.

 

You are like dear moon

Far away but always so close

Like soft breeze of basant

Touching very deep into my heart

For tranquil water as sun

They are far apart but always so close.

 

These distances always so close

As you are far but so close

You are not here with me

Yet, you are with me.

Author's Note

Please be honest. Basant means autumn,

Reviews

[Talesha]

I love this..I understand every word.The person I wake up thinking about and go to sleep dreaming of..lives so many miles away. I haven't kissed or hugged him since August 23rd 2014,but my mind and heart is faithful to him..lovely poem.Could not have said it better.

[Lyndy]

This poem is lovely and somehow, it made me think of sunset. Hahaha.

Overall, I really enjoyed it. :D

[Saddam]

Thank you... I am glad you enjoyed it.....

[Jamestown]

Fantastic write my friend! The last stanza is great, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend......

[Deepika]

If the love is genuine from both the ends, then the distance is merely a number. You've beautifully showcased how the distance can actually bring the hearts closer..Good one:)

[Saddam]

Thank you so much dear friend...... You are kind....

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

One heart's desire and swelling hope.
Nice thoughts.

[prachi prangya agasti]

A heartfelt emotional piece

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A touching and ever increasing swell of emotion rains on this piece, well done.

[Sindu]

Second stanza is great. When love is honest and full of faith, distance doesn't matter. It is a test to be faced. Nice views ssadd but with grammatical errors edited, it can be better

[MsJewel]

Miles apart and yet, you can feel every heart beat....
Beautiful poetry my friend.

:) Julie

[Matching Socks]

This is lovely SSADD. Flows flawlessly and leaves the reader with a lovely feeling.
I think many can relate to the closeness of a relationship despite physical distance.