Are you sick?

Are you sick?

A Poem by Sagela
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Something random

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Are you sick my love?

What is wrong?

You are about to die?

Are you suffering my love?

Do you just want to get it over with?

Do you just want to die?

Here you go my love.

No more suffering.

No more torture.

Rest in peace my love.

I love you.

© 2009 Sagela


Author's Note

Sagela
ok like everything else I want constructive criticism please. I really appreciate it!!!

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haunting. Vocab is limited but works here. nice write.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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My name is Sage I love poetry Whether free or rhythm I like all kinds. Just don't judge my writing Unless it deserves it. It is free Unstructured. Its not always me Or my life It is what.. more..

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