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A Poem by Sagela

Fears that don't make sense.

Few conquer them,

Some deal with them,

Most avoid them.

Everybody has them.

But I am one of those few.

Not because of choice,

But of circumstance.

So all of you old people,

Buses,

Falling from someplace 5 feet up,

And all you other fears,

Watch Out. 

I will defeat you. 

© 2009 Sagela


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Sagela
I know this one isn't that good, but please give me feedback anyways

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I love the determined focus of your words... glimpse by glimpse you make us ponder our lives... our fears. And hear you give such a hopeful expression of your desire to rise above. In that way, you give us hope that we can rise above too. Excellent write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


As Amy Hartzler sang "Fear is only in our minds but its taking over all the time..." I like its it was short and to the point!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ah. Yes, I have an intense fear of eternity, that doesn't make sense. Oh! and I'm afraid of... *mumbles something incomprehensible*

ANYWAAY, It was alright. Not the best, but not the worst. And I'm not the best person to explain why. (I'm not a very good poet. Heh.) But, it just sounds awkward to me, I don't know why, but it does. er... That's it I guess. So.... Yeah. Sorry I couldn't help any more then that.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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