A poem of a Moment

 

 

 

 

My head is boiling

Like a volcano about to explode

 

My hands are tightening

Unable to control them, unable to hold

 

 

 

My teeth are pressing

About to crash each others

 

In the middle of the class

Cant shout, cant cry, cant whisper

 

 

 

But unable to hold myself

I dont know what to do

 

I feel trapped in myself

Unable out to go

 

 

 

Free me, O ...Free me

Free me from what I feel

 

I gave up trying

Not finding what may cure me or heal

Author's Note

written from 10:00 a.m. to 10:05 a.m. in Algebra Class
A poem in a moment of feeling down.
It may contain some mistakes or irrelateness but i dont like to edit poems which i write in such situations because they just go out alone.
So please ignore these errors u may find

Reviews

[Nima M]

I can totally relate. I didn't find any errors (I didn't look too hard, anyway). It's awesome. My brother writes poetry, but I usually don't like to read poetry. Well, I guess that's not true. Since I've been on WC, I've read lots of poems, most of them I liked and some I didn't care for. But I like yours.

[Amila Jay]

Oh .. a stuck in situation .. I never liked Maths really. Great poem:)

[reflectingus]

I really dislike Algebra, always did. And I would always dread that class, still do, and feeling this way, you're not the only one, I can assure you that. What I love about poetry is that, whenever you feel a certain emotion, writers like us can just put it down in words, and then it feels so nice to read it over later...when you feel better. Haha, anyway, I like this poem a lot, emotions are perfectly conveyed, and I can totally relate. In the meanwhile, Math- be nice.

[Amata Luna]

Math subjects are like bullets for me. Either you dodge it or you take the impact for it. Now this one's cool. And I really like the fact that you did it just for five minutes. That's just proof that ideas are not made, they're already in the recesses of your head. Nice work.

[Allen Smuckler]

The bell might help....:)
Algebra always did that to me too...still does.
you certainly get your point across natty..in a very succinct and desperate sort of way...I never felt you were helpless or hopeless though, just a bit hapless...a nice mock pizza at lunch will help free you from all this angst....until Biology class, that is.
Enjoyed the write nm...thanks for sharing
allen

[Mockingbird]

this shows the epitome of frustration at its boiling point. great job in evoking this feeling.

[jennifer little]

nice and well writen poem great job keep up the good work thanks for sharing this lovely work with me

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Superb intensity to this ....
fantastic :D

[Ellen Brook]

This is exploding with your emotions! It fills the other person with the same emotions too...I enjoyed it. Great work!
Haha...it's really funny you wrote this in your Algebra class. I feel the same in Mathematics classes. :P