Until I reach

Until I reach enlightenment,
I need not your words of fakery to subdue my heart-
Nor ur lies or stares of hate and treachery.
Thus depart from mine sight,
So that my soul can live in reverie.
Ur poisonous entity is not needed here,
Near my peaceful serenity...
So I say these words as a warning from me...
please dearest being stay away from me,
my peace, my mind, my soul...for all eternity.

~SalanSimone ~

Reviews

[emmajoy]

That such a young woman, wanting to learn,has posted this is quite extraordinary. Yes, have mixed it up a little, intentionally or no: 'olde worlde' language but also the use of non words such as 'ur' . Yet there is so much to admire, you;re certainly on your way. Take care, keep safe and say hi to Winchester for me - one of my favourite places!

[Chris Shaw]

If you want to achieve enlightenment you better shake off all attachments, especially toxic ones. You need peace and serenity my friend. Certainly no negative anchors weighing you down. Enjoyed the read.

Chris