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A Poem by SyW
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It's a poem

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Fire scorches and cleanses my mind
Leaving only truth
And the scent of ruined meat
The lies that struck a spark
You dancing in the flames
Silent beneath a layer of ash
Waiting for the first rain
To seed and bud anew
The growing of dreams

© 2019 SyW


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To me, i envision a person being set on fire- perhaps losing a loved one to such horrible way. But then as plants usually do, they grow back stronger and better. Ah, though you should definitely come up with a title for this lovely poem :D

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

SyW

5 Years Ago

Titles are the worst, thanks for the review :)
LazerRays

5 Years Ago

i agreee they are! i hope something pops up soon :P

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Added on April 17, 2019
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SyW
SyW

Ames, IA



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A Poem by SyW