Breaking Inside

You see the strength on my face
As I smile
But wouldn't you know
I tear my eyes out at night
As waves crash inside my brain
The smile covers it all
The smile is my only way showing
That I'm okay
To the world
To get no attention
But one day
I'll be found
With the pills
The bottle
The drugs
That smile will be torn from my face
I'll be on the floor
I'll be gone
And you wouldn't have known
How
And why

Reviews

[Strawberry Evil]

Woah so much emotion in this. I like the style it is written, and the strong, powerful feeling of it.
I can totally relate with the first bit, I often find myself hiding behind a smile too.
I like the end bit too, it almost made me feel sad, and weird. It's written so well, that the feelings behind it just rush over me. Also the way it isn't open, the reader gets exactly what you mean, and that makes it a good piece that shows your individual style, and makes me want to read more!
Very well written overall, good job, keep it up!