Happyness in see you

Life Style Adventure the Life

You are my Happiness

You are now my life

Your smile shows  me 

Beside me your side

My dream will its decide

Pull you in my real life

So Happiness were seen with you 

In presence of you in my Life

Now I know your kindness

You still save me in your life

Obviously Every one lives itself

At last I realized you are remain

With me also in our life

Reviews

[Celie Rose]

I like your poem. Feelings of your love expressed very well. Nicely written. Keep writing.

[Victoria]

ummm I'm confused you have a lot of grammar issues