My feeling you are right

My feeling you are right

A Poem by samparks,sam

Something in life makes beautiful.
Make the human feeling rememberable.
Experience of life makes recoverable 
Your acceptance  of in my life notable.
You became my life singable.
Every song of my life to you
The life is life is notable.
You were my destination 
Whereas Now make a life point achievable.
We were never far away not reachable.
Your presence around my life happier.
We make the life  happier

© 2016 samparks,sam


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Enjoyed your poem.
It is beautiful.
I feel the longing and hope.
It is very heartfelt.
"We were never far away not reachable.
Your presence around my life happier.
We make the life happier."
You are doing a great job. Keep writing.
Nicely written and thoughts are well expressed.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Such a beautiful poem. I feel the deep longing and passion. Well expressed and written. Keep up the good job. Keep writing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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samparks,sam
samparks,sam

Indian, India



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I am Chess player, My life always move step with thought of 10 steps ahead every time. Nature is my friend, Keep me smile. I start to write poems without experience of writing, but I can't believe my.. more..

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