How I save it

The dream of life, How I save it

You spread at a glance without crediting it

This is so easy for you to spread it

I know very well How I built these it

I still feel about the dream which I save it

You have no value still How much now I bear it

It's so easy mention trouble with it.

You never think about their sweetness in it

The God want to see, your patient at all in

Success has never come to life, saying it

Same feeling in me still  is still alone staying it

Your personality at the beginning I don't  feel so it

I every time  remember your reviewing in all this

I want to create so deep more dream

I want to live on forever in  deeply in these dreams

Whose I created  for you, makes crazy every green

Reviews

[Akshita]

Nice poem! : ) You like writing such poems, don't you?