Bring It On!!!

You think that you can break me down

with your pathetic words?

Say things to wound my spirit

break my heart and make me hurt?

 

You think that you can knock me down

and I will not get up?

You don't know me very well

This girl is beyond tough!

 

You think you're such a big man

hurling curse words in front of my child

You're nothing but a little man

my rage for you is wild.

 

You think that I'm afraid of you

that you can make me cry

I'd rather choke on a million tears

while you choke on my goodbye.

 

You think that I won't make it

in this big world on my own

I don't need your money

The walls of my heart are my home.

 

So, bring it on, you a*****e

You will never break me down

It's strong, beautiful women like me

that make this world go round!

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

You think you're such a big man
hurling curse words in front of my child
You're nothing but a little man

Damn girl you really gave it all, telling him just what he is... love your raw anger you express with your poetic grace.

[closed account]

LOOOOVED IT!!!!

OMG!! this was such a read!! Brilliant!! full of emotion, honesty, anger, strength and rage!!!
I am so glad you are writing!!

Amazing. my favorite part!!!


I'd rather choke on a million tears

while you choke on my goodbye.

WOW!!!

[Seriana]

WOOHOO!!! Can I get an amen? This is awesome! From one woman to another, I say preach on sister!! Seriously, it takes a brave girl to stand up and say this, and I'm proud to stand next to you. I love the "in your face" nature of this. Hum...I'm thinking a mass email to all men, world-wide. :) Bravo!

[Rhine Wolf]

Wow!!
yet another brilliant write! the stanza that totally floored me was;

"You think you're such a big man
hurling curse words in front of my child
You're nothing but a little man
my rage for your is wild."

such a powerful piece, and depicts how small he really is. the emotion in this poem are high and blunt making sure that the reader gets the message loud and clear, and what message would that be?

"So, bring it on, you a*****e
You will never break me down
It's strong, beautiful women like me
that make this world go round!"

if that is not clear enough for any one to read well then they are BLIND!

Blessed be!
Fallon

[darkgurl]

You think that I'm afraid of you
that you can make me cry
I'd rather choke on a million tears
while you choke on my goodbye

Now these are some amazing lines and so are these ones

So, bring it on, you a*****e
You will never break me down
It's strong, beautiful women like me
that make this world go round!

This is awesome I have a poem with this title in my wrestling book. I like
your verison, So full of charge and raw emotion. Put that man in his
plcae. Love it Wonderfully written....Kim