Neglected pet

I’m looking through my glasses

Watching your reaction

To the news the word and

Realization of what you did

Grinning, my head my f*****g messed up

Head Cause when all is done and said

I’m not the one left unfed

And this hunger deep inside is getting harder

And harder to hide

 

A monster you created tore apart my pride

A crazy you instigated, tore apart my mind

A sad little child, Neglected and crying

 

You’re yelling screaming too upset

The losers have won the bet

You’re a winner, oh so upset

 

Everyone’s seeing

Everyone’s hearing

You’re a winner, oh so upset

 

A monster you created tore apart my pride

A crazy you instigated tore apart my mind

A sad little child neglected and crying

 

I’m a pest you’re a peasant

We’re a perfect pair

There’s a monster you created in your bedroom lair

 

You care what they say

You lost the bet

Do you know what they say, of your tormented pet?

 

A monster you created tore apart my pride

A crazy you instigated tore apart my mind

A sad little child neglected and crying

 

Am I a sad little whelp? Neglected and crying

B***h, you’re about to join me

For all of time

 

A monster you created tore apart my pride

A crazy you instigated tore apart my mind

A sad little child neglected and crying

 

Don’t help me now

It was just a matter of time

A sad little child neglected and crying

 

 

 

Reviews

[Demyra]

It's not bad, but...you really should revise it. Mainly grammatically, there's a bit of faulty sentence structure here...