"...Friends!"

"...Friends!"

A Poem by Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"
"

When you are left with no options, You become Friends, the best friends, in fact!

"

 


















With this stretched lips

I grinned

And shouted ‘hello’

And she replied

“Shut up!”

Cheerless, but yes-

I was left

With no option

 

I got mesmerized

By the splendor of that ‘sale’

And rushed into

That shopping precinct

And was dragged out

“Dare not fritter away your money!”

My collar in her hand

I had no option!

 

With that extremism

Of lassitude-

Yes, I declared in my empire!

And I valiantly dozed off…

And got kicked down on the floor

“Get up lazy bone;

You are late for ‘the’ class”

And I had no option!

 

But,

This December-

When gush of wind

Will whisper (Scream, in fact)

“Catch me, if you can…”

With this mocking hilarity…

It will be me

And you will have no option!

 

…When I walk

This lonesome way

You are always missed

I swear!

Not for those laughter

We jointly glued

On People’s face-

Who avowed that:

“You guys are not funny, at all!”

And they had no options!

 

But,

For these bags are heavily

Burdened!

Had you been here,

You would have

Carried…

And I have no option!

 

You are the one with whom

I fear not,

To speak

About every frightening tales

Of life!

You are my best friend;

Other than this-

I have no option!!!



© 2012 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"


Author's Note

 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"
On my best-buddy's birthday!

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This is so cute!!! I loved the fifth and last verse, and I especially loved the "you have no option" aspect of this. It made me laugh :P It sometimes feels like that with my friends, like we were destined to be friends.... This is just so amazing!!! I hope she loved this!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Becca Bishop

11 Years Ago

I'm so glad!!! If I tried to write my friends poetry I think they'd try to put me in an insane asylu.. read more
 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

11 Years Ago

Very true with every poets...
Becca Bishop

11 Years Ago

Oh good and here I thought I'd be all alone!!! :D :D :D I feel so much better now :D :P



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So sweet
Else Left with no option :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Aww !! What a wonderful write celebrating B F F 's a sisterhood unlike anything else !

Posted 11 Years Ago


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 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

11 Years Ago

:')
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Sid
A very nice write, this is beautiful tribute to a close friend, a touching write, it feels good to have friends like this, makes everything so much easier and more enjoyable...great write!

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 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

11 Years Ago

Thanks Sid :)
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This is so cute!!! I loved the fifth and last verse, and I especially loved the "you have no option" aspect of this. It made me laugh :P It sometimes feels like that with my friends, like we were destined to be friends.... This is just so amazing!!! I hope she loved this!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Becca Bishop

11 Years Ago

I'm so glad!!! If I tried to write my friends poetry I think they'd try to put me in an insane asylu.. read more
 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

11 Years Ago

Very true with every poets...
Becca Bishop

11 Years Ago

Oh good and here I thought I'd be all alone!!! :D :D :D I feel so much better now :D :P
fine

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 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

11 Years Ago

thanks :)
Oh, I love this. What a great tribute of love to your friend on her birthday.. You both are blessed to have one another..xo :)

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 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

11 Years Ago

Thank you Lily :)
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Tex
A wonderful tribute you have penned here. Very touching. Very sweet. I hope you have sent your dear friend a copy of this. i have a question. every stanza's last line has the word option in it except one that ends with a line that reads:

And you will have no choice!

I was expecting to see the last word there to read option!

why the different wording here?

I loved the write. Very nicely done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

11 Years Ago

Oh- I have changed :) whenever I write, I seldom check it twice and upload it directly- so sometime .. read more
Tex

11 Years Ago

NP glad to have helped... you have crafted a real gem here.
this is amazing! and I have no option but to save it to my favorites! Friendships like yours are rare and precious! thanks for sharing this wonderful and so well written poem!

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 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

11 Years Ago

Thanks Mary
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DrD
What a marvelous homage and gift. When a friendship grows up with us, it becomes as indelible upon us as ourselves and you captured this perfectly and with a very original approach that I truly, truly enjoyed.

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 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
“Dare not fritter away your money!”

My collar in her hand

I had no option!............a gift? Wonderful.



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 Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

11 Years Ago

:)

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