Surmounting...

Eternal, was nothing 

Over here!

Eternal, it will 

Never be!

In this village of voracity,

My folk,

Won’t stay with you

What you see….

Never shall halt this contentment…

Nor will halt this sorrow

Bravo! 

For you are climbing this ridge, 

Now, you must go down this furrow!

Tears may turn to smiles

And smiles shall drop as tears!

When...

You are yet to complete these miles

Unaccompanied you stand, in this company of fears!

Radiate your soul now,

For this soul shall remain the same,

And the bugles of battle shall trumpet,

You must end this never-lasting game…

Bear in this mind…

Permanent will never be this world!

Nor shall this sky!

So, worry not my folk

your cage is wide-open, yes…

Widen your wings and fly!!!

 

Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

28-04-2013-Mudumalai-India-1:50 pm

To my thoughts...

Photo-credits:

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Author's Note

...For those who fear the uncertainty...

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"So, worry not my folk
your cage is wide-open, yes…
Widen your wings and fly!!!"
A nice ending to a very good poem. I agree with your thoughts in the poem. We must live and learn. We need to try to enjoy the ride. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

Most-anticipated review :) Thank you

[TheSweet]

How empowering - and essentially try, might I add. Everything is temporary is a everlasting feeling in my life and when pressed on how insignificant that makes me feel I shirk the notions - saying instead that it gives me more freedom. Thanks for confirming my beliefs :D Awesome read!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Artistry at its best, much enjoyed :)

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

Thank you :)

[Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAutho..]

It is unnecessary for the anvil to be prepared to meet the hammer. It was made for this purpose and is not alive. Do you think the human soul, as intangible as the feelings of an anvil and hammer, must be prepared to meet life? If yes, then why is there always the expectation and fear of life's uncertainty? If no, then the same question.

Should poetry be pragmatic, always? Can it be less or more at a whim? There are as many answers as thinkers of thoughts. Who can know the true meaning of the words a poet writes? The truth is elusive, relative, fleetingly enduring.

This is not a review. It is commentary; elicited from reading your fine poem. I thought it might interest you and serve a more noble purpose than plaudits.

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

Your thoughts always triggers me to think beyond the poem, I write. And I thank you for igniting this spirit. Soul and body- once we are clear about the analogy...we fear not with the uncertainty! We must realize that the world- is perishable. So, our ultimate goal, should not be running after the materials...
Poetry, in first hand, is vast...People write about love, fear, anxiety, inspiration, experiences and many other facets where they are not able to speak, but, yes write...Poetry is a voice of those unheard stories...

[Dayran]

Well done. You've come a long way to realizing life's organization and our obligations to the needful. More than giving a man a fish to eat, teaching him how to fish ensures he remains fed his entire lifetime.

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

True :) dayran

[Allen Smuckler]

wonderful write Sanjeeta
and as we get up and spread our wings
let us hope
and let us pray
He IS there to welcome us in..
allen

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

Thanks Allen :)

[Talal Hussain]

Wonderful composition Sanjeeta..great stuff :-)

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

Shukriya, Talal :)

[Saumya]

THAT...VERY LOVELY !!!!!!!!!.....AND MOST IMPORTANTLY, THE BEST WAY TO LET THE PEOPLE, AROUND US FEEL GOOD AND POSITIVE...!!....IN SHORT I JUST LOVED IT...!! WELL DONE DEAR!! KEEP IT UP!!! AND YES THE LAST STANZA WAS THE SOUL OF YOUR POEM.... WHICH REALLY TOUCHED MY HEART!!!!
saumya..

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

Aha...I am inspired again :)

[Saumya]

oh!!....... you are highly welcomed dear!!!

[Kanchan Ojha "Eureka"]

I get spellbound each time I read ya ...
Lovely one :-)

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"]

:) Thanks sweets