IF MY ANSWER WAS "YES"

Dedicated to Supertramp [ Facebook Chat Poem]

Wednesday, November 24, 2010

IF MY ANSWER WAS "YES"

I say you are good

not to make you sad

if " yes" was the answer...

for am I bad??

Still my heart says...

there is some good hidden

beside the veil of dark shadow...

there's an Eden

Your presence is not noticed

but

i can feel your whisper

that silently says

Hey , I am here ...

to enlighten your days

Was that a thought,

that evoked me,

I was in Incorporeal...

Beautiful Corals in the Sea !

If "Yes" was my answer

to let you know,

that "Yes" is sometime

as Cruel as "No" !

Then what would you do ?

Jump off the cliffs ?

and Gang the river dry ?

or freeze your soul...stiff..?.

Only if My answer was "Yes"

- Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini
Time-11:26pm, wednesday
24th November,2010
Mitrapark,Kathmandu
[Dedicated to one of my old best friend from IPSS...Into the Wild]

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I was asked many times in my life of belief and faith. With old age I went back to my Native American belief for many reasons. I believe you must try to be kind and help people in need. Good things bring good karma and bad will return the same. I believe in the end. We must answer for our deeds to a God or become part of Earth again. Better to have been kind and hope good people can find a paradise. A excellent poem. Made me think a lot this early morning.
Coyote

[Audrey Howitt]

I love the honesty of this poem--it is true in way that makes me take pause. Well done!!!

[Brad]

there is so much brutal truth to this one

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

To find the answers, here is hoping your friend found the reply they needed ; )

[Julie Beth]

i loved this i liked the picture to great job :)

[Katannaism]

You kind of went a little overboard with the ellipses. Usually just three "..." would be enough to really bring the words/sentences out. But this is still a really good piece nonetheless.

[Daniel Atkinson]

Wonderful and thought-provoking. Nice work.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

very thought provoking!! brilliant

[Lily Mae]

I like the way that you point out that a "yes" can be as cruel as a "no" ...so true.. :) I really enjoyed this:) x

[Linear]

Well just one line I didn't quite understand.......Gang the river dry........but you do leave such wonderful thoughts in the mind of your readers, can a Yes be as cruel as a No......you know I do think so, and I'm quite sure Eden can be found :O]