The Joy rebounce!!!

Saturday, August 22, 2009

The Joy rebounce!!!

The moments when your tears fall,
In the dusk, when the woods receive a call,
the night creeps in and softly it says
" Do not lose hope ! I shall bring you a day"

The night,then, reigns and the evils rules on,
they celebrate the lights that are gone,
then slowly the ray enters and dawn arise,
the devils runaway and can hear their cries

The first bird that chirp, the hymn from Almighty,
the beams of strength and the power from the Deity,
the sky roars "Evils are away ! the majesty God's announce"
The sacred rule begin...the joy re-bounce...

Posted by Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini' at 11:43 PM

Reviews

[imawriter]

the English is a bit rough, but never mind that. It is a beautiful poem. I like the idea of the day chasing away the devils of the night. True with life too. Sadness that comes at night usually disappears with the sun. keep writing and I will keep reading

[cfix]

Simply Amazing!!!!

[Jvl narasimharao]

AS A RHYMER MY SELF i ADORE YOUR POEM.It is very optimistic with full of wonderful images.
yoursJVL