Diluted !!!

I , hereby , dedicate this part of my imagination to the World where everything gets diluted....

Concentrated Ambiance

Pulls You

to get diluted

with the air

that faintly cross

the hills

Ripples the Pond

and

Get mixed up with the soil

The Emotions within You

Will get diluted

when those tears

washes your eye-lashes

& topples down on the letter..

Your words

hence

diluted...

When the massive crowds

cries for You

You , Alone and

The swarm of Heads

Applauding hands

Brave , you stand

Head high

Your Fear

hence

diluted...

When You are resting your body

On the death bed

You smile

the World drops their hearts

You are

Perishable

and

Finally,

Your smile , Diluted...

World mourns !!!

and

It's the truth!!!

God has

His own ratio

To dilute

You and the Space

its

Zero is to two ratio

Where

Your Normality seldom matters

Your creed seldom matters

Your possession seldom matters...

After all,

You are meant to be

Diluted..!!!

Sanjeeta Sharma Pokharel "Hridayaninadini"

Time: 12:05 pm-2nd April, 2011

Saturday,

Me and My works around

Mitrapark , Kathmandu,

Nepal

Accompanied by

Pen , Diary and Laptop

and A heart-Which is diluted..!!!

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Allen Smuckler

When I first read "Diluted" I was going to say, "nay" we are not diluted...I don't want to be diluted...not me...however
as I read and re-read this classic poem...I began believing what you were telling me...and the reality of it all...is that we do dilute and wane and eventually fade away.
Dilute, if you will...A very powerful write and not only did I love it..........I felt it.
allen

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Larry Dyson

hmmm most of my life is not perishable ..only my flesh is perishable... interesting thought ...

Posted 12 Years Ago

SoulCrusader (Yas)

Speaks so much fine wisdom here and balances it in some fine context that makes it great....excellent :)

Sel Whiteley

This is awe-inspiring, so sublime. We do seem to be overly-focused on the things that don't matter. This rises the most poignant of all questions: purpose and answers by illustrating human insignificance and our inability to truly capture anything. We never truly experience. We live in a shadow realm no matter how much we achieve. This is nicely brought home through the images of centrality to the triumphant crowd, applause and the eulogies surrounding death.

Audrey Howitt

Somehow I hate the idea that we are diluted--don't you think poetry undilutes?

Brad	you are not only a good poet, but a great philosopher, and satirist as well, nice job Posted 13 Years Ago you are not only a good poet, but a great philosopher, and satirist as well, nice job Rating /100 1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tinasha LaRayé

this was breathtaking...it has a 'spoken' quality about it. I would love to hear you read it to hear your emphasis and inflection. This is so pertinent for today too...where we dwell on so many things that just don't matter at the end of the day...and the things here you have hi-lighted, touch the heart deeply and truly move the soul. Thank you for reminding us to 'feel' with this poem. I believe you are a poet that could change the world...if it was your calling to do so. :o)