A L'air Libre' (In the Open Air)

A L'air Libre' (In the Open Air)

A Poem by Sunflower/Sara Kendrick
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short, poulter's measure

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A nice cool breeze circulates
Remnants of the Sunday storm
A red sun rising; beautiful
in its color and form

Red sunrise in the morning
A warning to all sailors
But then the color changed to gold
Maybe a day to savor

© 2016 Sunflower/Sara Kendrick


Author's Note

Sunflower/Sara Kendrick
Out on the porch in the morn

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Your poem beautifully captures the beauty of nature. The way you describe the breeze and the sunrise is both vivid and poetic. Your use of rhyme and imagery is particularly effective, and it helps to create a sense of wonder and appreciation in the reader. I think that your poem is a testament to the power of art to help us process our emotions and connect with others.

Posted 1 Year Ago


A delightful uplifting poem.
Full of vibrancy and color.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is very well written and has such lovely imagery.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sunflower/Sara Kendrick

7 Years Ago

Ahh!! Thanks for the kind review..I hope that this was a blessed day for you..Sara
Coyote Song

7 Years Ago

You're welcome & it was.

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Added on June 29, 2016
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