Spiraling Universe

Inspired work...

May your gift expand like a spiraling universe

Being placed on paper, internet, or  in the sand

Flung out amongst the stars to shine brightly

Touching on the heart and lives of many

 

When your cup has overflowed into the saucer

Of plenty may it flow onto  print and touch

On the lives of many

May your journey continue like the stars

 

Filled with blessings near and far

May your sauna be warm and moist

To relax the tension and inspiration thrust

May your days be filled with love

 

And your nights be pieced with relaxing dreams

Until your quilt is fully finished and you

Sleep the sleep of the kings

Then your journey to other stars be fast

 

And very productive where you rule

Reign and kingdoms build that are magnificent

And very splendid

Where all is joy, peace, and love forever in it

Author's Note

Inspired after viewing a show that was talking about some things that scientist and astrologist have learned about the universe ...Spiraling systems are the only shape system that supposrt life as we know it because of the gravitational pull...There are only six spiraling systems in the know universe...I thought that this was awesome...Sunflower

Reviews

[Hellslastwarrior]

I liked the ending the most I have to admit those last few lines sounds slightly like a prayer, I enjoyed this poem and want to see some more lovely work by the one and only SUNFLOWER! :) :)
TEd

[Addie]

Wow. This is a very serious piece. I really love how you took astrology, life lessons, and even a bit or religion to make a great poem. Very good work =D