The Rain Lily

Learning Than-Bauk..

 

The rain drew you

Love does hew you

The glue desire

 

For a perfect

Love connect with

A beautiful flower

Author's Note

Second stanza not to perfect form...Than-Bauk has four syllables per line, line one the rhyme is the fourth syllable, the second line the rhyme is the third syllable, and the third line the second syllable the rhyme...Sunflower

Reviews

[Mauricio Montoya]

I could never understand the rules of poetry, but I like how this comes together and I agree it is a work of art.

[WindSong]

It's a beauty! I love the expressive wording and feeling. A gracious and enchanting poem.
WindSong

[emmajoy]

You really impress me! To conform to rules and yet create such a delightful piece of writing is a tremendous achievement. 'Tis lovely, Sarah.

[An owl on the moon]

I'm amazed at your skill with such a wide variety of poetic expressions, making them flow flawless in beauty. A wondrous work of art.

[just rose.]

delicate and fragile, with that lovely glue.