My Words

Do you refresh the page
to check for me?
Do you look though
my old poems?
Do you see my read request
and smile?
What am i to you?
A child, inadequate
at my art.
Or am i growing,
changing as you watch.
I may be young but
I'm still a writer.
I hunger for words
your words.
I thirst to for words
my words.
Are my poems your world
or do they kill your eyes?
Are my words power
or weakness?
Are my requests sunshine
or rain.

Reviews

[Leigh]

It all depends how much time I've got, I came back from 2 weeks holiday to about a 100 read requests! You make a good point with this piece, it will make me think about the site a bit more..Thanks