The Deal changed

I know why you changed.
You did it
to save me.

You changed
so I wouldn't die.
You protected
me.

But Papa
you changed.
From good
to evil.

You kill
to save what
doesn't need saving.
You kill.

I promise
to find a way.
A way to
get rid of the power.

Just promise
to listen.
I love you Papa
and can't see
you this way.

You said
I'll save everyone.
But now it
controls you.

Your magic,
your power,
has corrupted
your mind.

Please, come with
me to this new world.
A world without
magic.
A world without
pain.

Author's Note

This is a poem from Baelfire's perspective from Once Upon A Time

Reviews

[Dez]

wow that was good.... i really liked it ( mabey cause i like fantasy and killing when i read and its not as bad as it sounds).

[Pratik]

I didn't read the story.. but this is a gripping poem... a daughter's plea with that hint of supernatural makes it interesting.. good one :)

[Sarah W. French]

Thank you! ...and it's actually a show. ....And Baelfire is a boy. Sorry if I sound pushy or anything. but this is my favorite show.
here's a link for a promo: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Rga4rp4j5TY

[MachinaWriter]

Never read Once Upon A Time, but this poem definitely makes me curious. Good job. It has me wondering exactly why he changed and how. A good read.

[Sarah W. French]

it's actually a show. Probably my favorite!
Here is a promo for season 1: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=15__iA1MTqc

[MachinaWriter]

Even better ^^ The promo looks awesome. Ugh, I wish I had cable. I miss out on so much. lol

[Sarah W. French]

Season two just started...I think you can watch the pilot on ABC. I would definitely recommend the show. I have fallen in love with it. I even bought season one. I particularly like Rumplestiltskin.

[MachinaWriter]

I'll check it out somehow. Maybe I'll find a few episodes on the internet somewhere lol Oh, btw I just found out about the blog option on this site and put up my first blog entry. You should check it out, if you get the chance. Never done a blog before.