New Dark One

the first poem of my Dark One series

My skin is covered
in icy veins of blue
And sprinkled with
gold dust
My nails are painted
black with dead dreams
Power blasts from
my core
Eyes are cold gray
with specks of blue
I am one with magic
and it controls me
A vile of lake water
hangs from my neck
And yet I'm still weak
cowering in darkness
For I'm a Dark One
feared and abandoned 
by one and all

Author's Note

please tell me what you think

Reviews

[Rhea752]

i love it. keep writing.

[Ellie Howard]

I love how dark of a feeling this gives me, great job

[Dark Poetry]

An equal dark and gentle poem, I love it.

[Rosalind Gale]

I like perusing the 'unreviewed' section - sometimes one happens upon a poem that one takes to immediately. I like the feeling this piece gives me - kind of an isolated joy. Well done.

Rosa -x-